Laura, this is an improvement. However, you still have F natural notes when this is supposed to be in G Major with F sharp. You have notes in the bass line that clash with your chords such as in measure 7. You have a lot to think about as you head into your 3rd revision. 16/20
Laura, this is an improvement. However, you still have F natural notes when this is supposed to be in G Major with F sharp. You have notes in the bass line that clash with your chords such as in measure 7. You have a lot to think about as you head into your 3rd revision. 16/20
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